The Banshee Spirit Of Bawahali
Posted by deathsxqueen
Date Posted: 11/05/2007

"That is so not true, and you know it!" snapped Marcella in Justin's face after he finished telling the story. "Ghost's don't exist, neither do Banshees!" she said coldly.
The story Justin had told was about the ghost of banshee from an uncharted island a few hundred miles off the coast of Hawaii, who's name was Bawahali. According to the story, Bawahali was locked away on the island for several years, then broke free from her prison to terrorize the descendants of those who put her there, the Hawaiian people.

Marcella and Justin lived on the island of Oahu. It was said that Bawahali terrorized the citizens but was destroyed in what was now an old abandoned house way back in the woods. If you went into the house at 1:00 am, the time the banshee was killed, Justin said, you would hear the banshee's screams and you would die. This story had been started, but no one had been brave enough to check this theory.

So that night, Marcella decided that she, Justin, and their friend Ailani would go into that house together. They decided, though, that they would send only one in at a time, so the others could see what would happen. Ailani, being the bravest of the bunch, went in first. They waited until 12:55 am before they sent Ailani in, and the other two waited. They couldn't see or hear anything.
"Why isn't she back yet?" huffed Marcella at 1:45.
"I dunno, maybe I should go in after her," said Justin fearfully,
"Fine, but she's probably just trying to scare us," said Marcella.

Justin walked up to the creepy house, opened the door, and disappeared from view. It was now 2:00 am, and Marcella was beginning to worry. She decided to creep up to the old house, and peek through the window. There, in the drawing room, she saw her two best friends hanging from the ceiling, heads tilted to the side and blood coming out of their ears. Marcella screamed, but was frozen with fear. Then, her fear paramounted when a scream answered her. Fear, the last emotion she felt, and that horrible scream the last thing she heard.

All three children were found hanging in the drawing room, blood flowing out of their ears. The first, and last, people to meet the banshee spirit of Bawahali.

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